Poems anyone?

Well, as the title reads, it's Poem time! Post any cool ones you find!

I shall start with one I made up :D


I have a slightly messed up mind :D And no one said poems had to rhyme :D

One I wrote for a valentines day comp online....was a finalist.


One Night

Mountains stand tall with mystery
Framing imperial shores
Moonlit with orient pearls, fluent roses and frozen candles
Within our bed of dreams our passions spent
Through Delicious sighs, stolen kisses and melted looks
Naked lips released in ecstasy by a lone touch
An ice cube down fiery skin
Sleep on dreams of heaven and mirages of sapphires set in snow
Cover me in sleep so I may dream
Of bird song, sandcastles and your smile
Sheltered in your thoughts of how our eyes close

My award winning P4 poem:
There's a mummy in my room,
When he should be in a tomb,
Things are getting crazy,
By the way, my name is Daisy,
I got the phone,
and sent him back home,
I think he lost a shoulder,
It's under a boulder!
Oh yeah. I can rhyme anytime.

Woah PK. That's amazing!

ROTFLOL I love it Lehd :D I just entered my poem into a Canadian Poetry contest :D

Hehe, I wrote it back in P4, and it won my class competition becauses it made sense (Mostly) and rhymed
I wonder what my current english teacher would say?

I don't have any..yet. For english I have to write a poem inspired by an artwork, so when I'm done I'll post it here..maybe

Thanks Jake :D

I entered it into that poetry contest LadyEmillye linked too :D

Love the poems :)
I have one but I'll find it later.

Coolio guys :D

PK, hope you do well! I really could use that 500 :P

Okay well he's the draft for my poem, the good copy is due next week so any advice is appreciated.

A man,
He slowly moves his legs,
It is dark but not yet night,
His thoughts seem to cloud around him,
Like swarming insects wanting to eat him alive,
What is it that he thinks about?
The past or is it the future?
Or maybe the present,
But he keeps on walking,
The only way to find out his future,
And to forget his past,
Is to keep on walking,
And that is what he does.

LOL shitting I know but still :P

All the bold is something I personally would change:

The man,
He slowly moves his legs,
It is dark but not yet night,
His clouded thoughts around him,
Like swarming insects wanting to eat him alive,
What is it that he thinks about?
Is it the past or is it the future?
Or maybe it is the present,
But he keeps on walking,
The only way to find out his future,
And to forget his past,
Is to keep on walking,
And that is what he does.

Otherwise, it's really good!

Thanks :) I suck a poetry. I'll add that to the good copy, it sounds better like that.

It's inspired by this painting:

It's called 'Painting' by Peter Booth. He doesn't add I real title or say anything about his paintings because he thinks that if people can't tell what it is or have any idea then he has failed at an artist which I think is really amazing thing. He was/is very talented (I'm not sure if he's alive, I doubt it though).

Awesome!!!!!!!!

I'm in a writing mood... Hm...

No life depressing poem!

Beautiful by all.
@ Pistol that is so sweet. It made my heart flutter a little.
@ Jake. makes me sad :''(: but incredible writing skills.

Lol thats Kat :D I am quite depressing when I write.

Another:

Thats really good Jake o_o Whoa

Lol thanks :] I have about 7 more xD

MORE?? they're gripping.

LOL :] I write at least 3 a week :P

Drowning in a deep depression,
Crying out for wisps of love,
Dreaming of the words unspoken,
The memories now written of,
Sword in hand,
Lost inside a land of despair,
The dreams I once had,
The hope now lost,
Left behind to whither,
The sands of time pour through my fingers,
And thus I stand here dying,
Wondering if the pain will leave,
The torment get up and walk away,
Leaving me,
Alone

:''(: nice Izzy. well not nice but you know. nice.

Dawww that was really good izzy :]

Wanna hear one that I wrote in the 4th grade lol? Here it is.

Wandering Around

Wandering around in the dark of night
Wondering which path is wrong,
and which is right
as the cool winds wrap 'round
wondering if you'll be
safe and sound
or if the cool winds will take charge
and leave you wandering around more

Haha! When I was in the 4th grade I was a very creepy child, and since we were currently learning about poetry, all of my poems had somebody dying or getting lost or something.... I read a lot of scary stories back then lol. The funny thing is though, now I don't watch any scary stories or anything, because I am absolutly terrified.

Trapped inside my own dark dreams,
Lusting for your lips,
Yearning for the warmth of love,
To taste the blood red kiss,
Crying in the hollow nightmare,
Calling out your name,
Waiting for a fallen star,
To grant my single wish

Thanks for your comments guys

Another great one izzy.
@sim cool for 4th grade. Dont be scared anything thats worth being scared of can be slapped.

Thanks a lot Kat, lately I have been popping out the poems like there's no tomorrow. Probably because it's summer, and I'm not seeing a someone everyday like when I was in school

The night is like sugar
Sweet like a dream
Lost in your lips
Held in your arms
Your love is like water
I live or I die
Without you the darkness
You complete my life

Hey guys! I feel so out of the loop cause I've been on holidays!, but I'm back now and reading your poems makes me think how much better you all are than me at writting them haha. This is my favourite poem I ever wrote:

Roses are red,
Violets are blue,
Most rhymes rhyme,
But this one doesn't.

Eiphos you made me die of laughter and then come back to life so I could read it again and again and again. That is pure genius I love it!